I believe that there is no person can succeed without help from someone else. The help can be from father, mother, friend, husband, wife, sister or anybody who gives him words, money, encouragement or any kind of help. Everybody has a dream or a goal wants to achieve it, and needs any of these kinds of help to move on. When people want to achieve their goals, they may face some problems have to solve them, risks have to overcome them, loans have to pay them, or some weaknesses have to overcome them. Therefore, people have to help each other to achieve their goals even if they have their own achievements, and they must not live for themselves only, because there are another people are waiting at least one word to live. Sometimes one word is enough to change other person life.
I think the person should not be as a candle bursts itself to give the light to others, but must be as a tree benefits people by its shadow and fruit, but it also still strong and firm. The biggest companies in the world were established by some individuals who share their ideas, money, reputations and works.There are a lot of examples in ourlives which prove that people need help from others to succeed.
I still remember the story about the nine disabled people who participated in Seattle Olympic. They could not run but they liked to participate and try. After the contest began, one of them fell on the ground and started to cry. The other eight people came back to him, and one Mongolian girl hugged him and she asked him “do you feel ok now?”. Then all of them started to walk together, and the entire crowd clapped along time. All people were affected by this situation because all of us know that the live is greater than make the win for only ourselves. This is the reality of success.
I hope you enjoy my topic.
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2 comments:
Hi, Raghdah, Nice to meet you at your blog.
I strongly agree that different people define the success in different angles. But the most important thing is wihtout help we can do nothing only desperate. Because we are in social group,not alone.
Moreover, as your mentioned in your second paragraph, I paraphrase that the paticipattion is also successful. There is always one winner in contest. And we cannot deny the hard work from all the other people. At least they tried their best to compete wiht their passion and sweat. In some sense they are no looser in every competetion.
Dear Raghdah:
Thank you for your blog, which I enjoyed reading.
Remember to check your work carefully. I have listed some areas to look at below.
Always try to take time to edit and proofread. Although I am looking at the journals for your ideas, and your responses to reading, I also would like you to try and incorporate what you are learning in your writing class.I look forward to your next journal!
Eilidh
-they may face some problems THEY have to solve, risks THEY have to overcome, loans THEY have to pay, or some weaknesses THEY have to overcome.
- there are OTHER people
- but it IS also still strong and firm
-The biggest companies in the world were established by some individuals who shareD their ideas, money, reputations and WORK.
-in THE SEATTLE OLYMPICS (I think you mean the Special Olympics - Seattle has never hosted the Olympics!)
-that LIFE is greater than JUST TRYING TO make the win for only ourselves
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